I didn't like it, the animation and visuals were way to rough around the edges, the concept and jokes were pretty direct, not much wit to it, etc. Overall it felt childish, but I'm assuming you are young, so it's fine and completely understandable... I am old as balls, so I am of course not your main audience.

Anyways I hope you keep hooked up on this animation thing, work on it, develop your style, stories, etc. make it a more personal work and let's see what you can come up with if you give it time!

Best!
Gus

Beautiful! I had not been back to newgrounds in several years, everytime i was mildly tempted the front page "spoofs" turned me away. Today I decided to have faith and explore further, and it payed off.
Great animation, super stylish, great music and syncing, loved the colors, the concept, the vibe peaceful / bittersweet, just an all around awesome animation!
Props, I wish there mere more like this, this is the type of stuff that make this community worth it, I might even be inspired to re-take this animation thing.
Gus M